Comments on: Ch1-2 The Water Festival

By: Philowen Aster

Philowen Aster — Thu, 15 Sep 2011 02:53:27 +0000

Um…the real-life villain was named Oliver, not Alexander.
Just FYI.

By: Canuovea

Canuovea — Tue, 09 Aug 2011 23:01:40 +0000

Don’t worry, I’m not proofing it. This is for relaxation before I go back to Dreigiau’s chapter 19 to double proof it.

By: Aywren

Aywren — Tue, 09 Aug 2011 08:07:23 +0000

Oh… and don’t read this too hard. It has never been edited and is probably really, really raw. ;-;

By: Aywren

Aywren — Tue, 09 Aug 2011 08:06:57 +0000

Wow… really? I had NO idea. I made the name up years ago (didn’t have Google back then to check things like this). Completely by chance!

By: Canuovea

Canuovea — Tue, 09 Aug 2011 08:04:51 +0000

I’m giving Darkstar another read through, just because. And I can’t help but comment…

“Alexander Cromwell”?

That was the guy who got one of the Kings of England beheaded. The guy who basically ran England as a mini-dictatorship. Also the guy that Milton’s Satan may very well be a representation of, if Paradise Lost is read in a certain way…

Love it.

By: Tricii

Tricii — Thu, 29 Jul 2010 18:57:05 +0000

Pardon,I mistook the chapter, had three open chapters and bundled me xD

By: Tricii

Tricii — Thu, 29 Jul 2010 18:45:57 +0000

a question that comes to mind.
because so much hatred on the part of Newt?
perhaps a bit Porom attracts him or just likes to annoy AC?

Ah!, your fic is so cool ^^