Comments for Coming of the Darkstar

Comment on Ch4-3 The Sealed Cave by Aywren

Aywren — Fri, 12 Mar 2010 03:30:51 +0000

Yep and fixed. Thanks!

Comment on Ch4-3 The Sealed Cave by Anonymous

Anonymous — Fri, 12 Mar 2010 03:26:53 +0000

‘His face. “Why not?”’

Is that suppose to be ‘His face fell. “Why not?”‘

Comment on Ch8-2 The Storming of Fabul by Weomur

Weomur — Sun, 31 Jan 2010 17:19:21 +0000

It’s kind of strange to think that Ben’s never actually dealt with battle fear before. Must be confusing…

Comment on Ch5-7 Forest Guide by Aywren

Aywren — Sun, 31 Jan 2010 14:06:21 +0000

You wouldn’t be wrong in imagining it, either! XD

Comment on Intermission 6 Zot by Weomur

Weomur — Sun, 31 Jan 2010 07:04:17 +0000

I haven’t even played the game and now I want to do just that. O.o

Comment on Ch5-7 Forest Guide by Weomur

Weomur — Sun, 31 Jan 2010 05:51:28 +0000

“The ninja threw his ego into the ring. Then inflated it.”
…For some reason when I read that, the first mental image I got was edge sitting in one of those inflatable duckies (You know… a pool ring) and holding a martini while saying “Hey, baby… you come here often?”

XD lolz.

Comment on Ch7-1 Summoning by Zera

Zera — Wed, 23 Dec 2009 01:18:53 +0000

Zemi says SoYaFu…. Is that on purpose?

Comment on Ch5-3 Into the Mountain by Tirition

Tirition — Thu, 17 Dec 2009 05:43:52 +0000

I’d say so. Or maybe a kiss. *grabs a bag of Hershey’s Kisses and throws them in Kip’s general direction* Chocolate always helps.

Comment on Ch5-1 O.M.E.G.A. by Tirition

Tirition — Wed, 16 Dec 2009 23:16:17 +0000

And more than a year later, this scene is still awesome.

Comment on Aftermath 1: Sparrow’s Sacrifice by Weomur

Weomur — Sat, 12 Dec 2009 03:58:33 +0000

ZOMG.

I really liked the ending. It gives you this little taste of what-might-have-been, but it doesn’t actually tell you. Just a little flicker.

It’s awesome. I wish I could write like that.